A fairy in disguise

Meadows turned to mist even the azure’s smiled,
lights were blinded till a distant mile,
when she walked down the morning aisle.

Fireflies were her companion when she sang along nightangles,
Moonlight was her curtain,
As she strolled through the shrouded forest,
Midst the starry fountain.
-Neeldip

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3 thoughts on “A fairy in disguise

  1. Beautifully written. Love how you recreate this mysterious atmosphere in the world of fairies and goblins. This is also the world of the Muse that whispers something in the poet’s ear. Is this why you say “A Fairy In Disguise”? Your poem carries something similar to a mystical experience. The ending is very powerful with the “starry fountain”. Isn’t that the fountain of life and inspiration? I personally think it would be perfect for the next Wednesday Prompt proposed by poet Jamie Dedes. If you wish to participate here is the link: https://jamiededes.com/2018/05/23/the-witching-hour-a-poem-and-your-wednesday-writing-prompt/

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    1. Thank you for appreciating my work, i will definitely keep your suggestion in mind 👍👍 but the poem is a mere description of the beauty of a woman and so does the title suggests, your derivation of the “starry fountain” is really good but wasn’t what I had thought, but one of the things that make a poem beautiful is that one word have thousand meanings and sometimes thousand meanings are hidden in one word.

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      1. Yes, that is true and one of the reasons why I am a poetry addict.

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