What’s left of nothing

The abundant sky and the surreal land,
Defied separation with showers,
When our paths crossed again,
Midst the glittering leftovers.

As I fell again for you with every drop,
And again I hoped it would never stop,
In the harsh fall we saw each other clear,
Although between us were a billion tears.

-Neeldip

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9 thoughts on “What’s left of nothing

  1. I like this…except that the word “leftovers” really didn’t fit. I was reading it, enjoying it, and getting into the spirit of it…and then that word just sort of bumped me back into reality–an unpleasant reality.😊 But it’s really is a great poem.

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    1. Thank you for your inputs, but the words in the poem has specific purposes sometimes thats the reason for some words👍👍

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      1. Yeah I know. Just thought you’d appreciate the input. I know I do on my poetry. (:

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  2. The Constant Lover Nov 7, 2018 — 4:31 pm

    Please write more. I love your poetry. It makes me happy to know that some men actually think about these things….

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, I do write keeping the people in mind.

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  3. And maybe a billion stars… great poem.

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